写作模板
按 [静态/动态] × [图表类型] 分类的通用写作框架,包含开头改述、Overview 和数据描述模板
静态类 × 表格(单个时间点)写作模板
基于 1 篇文章总结,随着更多同类文章的积累将进一步完善
要点:① 用 illustrates 替换题目中的 shows / gives information on;② 用 percentage / amount / number 明确数据类型,避免题目原文的 "information on";③ 用 across 而非 including 引导范围,更紧凑;④ 切勿盲目使用 "different" 等修饰词,除非图表有多个时间点或类型差异;⑤ 数清楚类别数量、对象数量,不可出现 "seven types" 这类事实错误
要点:① 两个维度覆盖——"全局最大/最小类别" + "某对象在多数类别中领先";② 不出现具体数字;③ 使用 accounted for / received the smallest share 标准占比搭配;④ "led in X of the Y categories" 精确表达部分领先,避免 "in all categories" 这类易出错的泛化
主体段一(第一组 / 主要类别 + 次要类别对比):
Regarding [类别A], [极值对象] recorded the highest percentage at [数据], followed by [第二名] at [数据]. By contrast, [最低对象] had the lowest figure at just [数据], while [中间对象1] and [中间对象2] fell in between at [数据] and [数据] respectively. For [类别B], most [单位] stood at a broadly close level of around [数据], whereas [异常对象] ranked first at [数据].主体段二(第二组 / 剩余类别):
As for [类别C], this was the least popular category in all [数量] [单位]. [领先对象] still led with [数据], whereas [最低对象] had the smallest proportion at just [数据]. The remaining [数量] [单位] — [列举] — spent a similar amount of roughly [数据].要点:① 固定衔接词序列:Regarding → By contrast → while → For → whereas → As for → whereas → The remaining;② 数据引用固定搭配 recorded the highest percentage at / had the lowest figure at just / stood at / fell in between at / ranked first at;③ 中间数值用 respectively 明确对应;④ 用破折号嵌入同位语列举剩余对象;⑤ 当多个数据接近时,用 "stood at a broadly close level of around" 避免重复报数
静态类 × 堆叠柱状图(双活动 × 多群体 × 多时段)写作模板
基于 1 篇文章总结,专门用于"两种活动 × 多个群体(如性别) × 多个时间段"型堆叠柱状图(stacked bar chart)。⚠️ 识图关键:每根柱子总高度 = 该群体参与该活动的总参与率(如男生玩游戏 = 85%);柱子内部 3 段堆叠 = 在已参与者中按时长(<1h / 1-3h / 4h+)的分布;柱子总高度 ≠ 100%,这是与"分组并列柱状图"最关键的区别
要点:① **the stacked bar chart** 直接点明"堆叠柱状图"——这是与一般柱状图的核心区分标识;② 用 illustrates 替换题目中的 shows;③ 用 "the percentage of X who spend different amounts of time on..." 精确描述图表本质;④ 用 "broken down by gender" 在结尾点明分组维度,比 "for male and female" 嵌入主语更紧凑;⑤ 切勿用 "how many time"(time 不可数)这类初级表达;⑥ **题目术语必须精准复用**——题目说 games consoles 就不能写 video games / computer games / game consoles
要点:① ⚠️ **一一对应原则(Task 1 高分核心结构)**——Overview 的两个核心点必须**与 Body 1 / Body 2 严格映射**:Body 1 写哪个活动,Overview 第一句就概括哪个活动;Body 2 写哪个活动,Overview 第二句就概括哪个活动。读者读完 Overview 应能预判 Body 结构;② 第一句概括"差异较小活动"(fairly comparable + majority for short periods),直接对应 Body 1 即将展开的两个数据维度(参与率接近 + 时长内部分布);③ 第二句概括"差异显著活动"(striking divide + far more likely + longer hours),直接对应 Body 2 即将展开的三个数据维度(参与率对比 + 主导群体时长累加 + 弱势群体远低);④ **By contrast** 在 Overview 第二句和 Body 2 段首两次使用,形成首尾呼应;⑤ **far more likely than** vs **more likely than** 准确呈现"显著差异"vs"略有差异"的程度区别;⑥ **不出现具体数字**,符合 Overview 规范;⑦ **错误结构示例**(应避免):Overview 第 1 句写"两活动整体接近"+ 第 2 句写"性别镜像"——这是按维度划分而非按活动划分,与按活动分段的 Body 不对应
主体段一(活动1:差异较小的活动):
In terms of [活动1], [All 总参与率]% of all [对象] reported [活动动名词], with [略高群体] noticeably more involved than [略低群体] at [数据]% and [数据]% respectively. The most common duration for both [群体类别] was [最高时段], accounting for [数据]% of [群体] and [数据]% of [群体]. Only a small minority of [对象] [动词过去时] for [极值时段], namely [数据]% of [群体] and just [数据]% of [群体].主体段二(活动2:差异显著的活动):
By contrast, [活动2 名词,如 gaming habits] show a striking [分组维度] divide. As many as [高参与群体数据]% of [高参与群体] [动词过去时] on [活动名], compared with only [低参与群体数据]% of [低参与群体]. Among [高参与群体], [数据]% [动词] for [中间时段] and a further [数据]% for [极值时段], meaning that [累计描述,如 over half / around three-quarters] of all [群体] spent at least [时段] [活动 -ing] each [时间单位]. [低参与群体]' figures were far lower, with [数据]% [动词 -ing] for [中间时段] and a negligible [极小数据]% [动词 -ing] for [极值时段].要点:① **双段分配策略**——一种活动一段,互不混合(不要 Body 1 写一半活动1再跳到活动2,否则信息重复);② 固定衔接序列:In terms of → with...respectively → The most common duration for both → Only a small minority...namely → By contrast → show a striking divide → As many as...compared with only → Among + 主语...a further...meaning that over half → Girls' figures were far lower, with...negligible;③ **比例引用阶梯**:As many as / compared with only / a further / meaning that over half / around three-quarters / namely + just / a negligible——多样化避免重复;④ **meaning that over half + spent at least an hour** 是从分组百分比累加得出宏观结论的高分句式,是 7+ 分作文标志;⑤ **negligible** 描述极低值(如 1%)的高分修饰;⑥ **数据准确性**——读图时优先看每根柱子的总高度(参与率)和每段的高度差(时长占比),不要把 "Y 轴 90%" 误读为"组内合计 100%"
动态类 × 流程图(生命周期/循环流程)写作模板
基于 1 篇文章总结,随着更多同类文章的积累将进一步完善
要点:① 用 illustrates 替换 shows;② 加入 "the various stages in the..." 明确流程图本质;③ 用同位语对主语做同义补充,避免与题目雷同
要点:① 覆盖三大维度——阶段 + 额外特征 + 循环性;② 用破折号嵌入阶段术语;③ 用 "thus completing a full cycle" 点明循环,直接触发 TA 高分;④ 如为非循环流程,将结尾改为 "before reaching the final [output]"
主体段一(前半流程):
The process begins in [起始环境], where [对象] [被动动作,如 are laid / are produced] [方位介词短语] for [时间范围]. Once [状态变化过去分词,如 hatched / formed], [新阶段对象], now known as '[术语]' and measuring [尺寸], [动作,如 migrate downstream to] [下一环境]. In this [环境特征] environment, they remain for [时长].主体段二(后半流程 + 循环):
Upon reaching [条件,如 a length of ...], [对象], at this point referred to as '[术语]', [动作] to [下一环境], where they spend [时长] [发育状态,如 maturing]. By the end of this period, they have grown into [最终阶段], with [尺寸数据]. These [最终阶段对象] then return to [起始环境] to [循环触发动作], and the [流程名] begins anew.要点:① 使用固定衔接序列 The process begins → Once [过去分词] → migrate/move → Upon reaching → By the end of this period → These...then;② 环境动作必须用被动语态(are laid, are hidden);③ 使用分词结构(measuring, hatched, referred to as)压缩句子;④ 结尾的 "begins anew" 呼应 Overview 的 "full cycle" 形成首尾呼应
动态类 × 流程图(工业循环流程)写作模板
基于 1 篇文章总结,专门用于工业生产/回收等"原料 → 加工 → 成品 → 回到起点"型循环流程
要点:① 用 illustrates 替换题目中的 shows / presents;② 用 "main stages involved in" 强调"阶段性"特征;③ 在动名词前加修饰词(如 used / raw)使表达更精确,避免与题目雷同
要点:① 用冒号 + 三段式列举所有主要阶段,让 overview 一目了然;② 必须显式点明 "completing a full cycle"——这是工业循环流程拿 TA 高分的关键标志;③ 阶段描述用动名词短语保持语法一致性(the collection of... / their cleaning... / their reprocessing...)
主体段一(前半流程:收集 + 初步加工):
In the first stage, [原料对象] are gathered at [起点位置], typically from [来源], before being transported by [运输方式] to [加工地点]. Following this, the [原料] are [加工动作1,如 washed with...] and [加工动作2,如 sorted by...] into [数量] categories: [类别1], [类别2] and [类别3].主体段二(后半流程:再加工 + 循环):
In the final stage, the sorted [原料] are sent to [再加工地点], where they are [关键加工动作,如 melted in a furnace] and transformed into [中间产物]. This [中间产物] is then combined with [新原料] and poured into [模具/容器] to be shaped into [成品]. Finally, the freshly made [成品] are returned to [起点对象] for resale, and the cycle begins anew.要点:① 固定衔接序列 In the first stage → before being transported → Following this → In the final stage → This X is then → Finally → and the cycle begins anew;② 全段保持被动语态(are gathered / are washed / are melted / are returned)符合流程图惯例;③ 用 "transformed into" 表达"形态转化","combined with" 表达"原料融合"——这两个动词是工业流程的高频高分搭配;④ 结尾的 "the cycle begins anew" 与 Overview 的 "completing a full cycle" 首尾呼应,是循环流程拿高分的固定收束
动态类 × 折线图 写作模板
基于 2 篇文章总结(2 线图交叉型 + 4 线图多国对比型),模板已覆盖折线图两大子类
要点:① 用 illustrates 替换题目中的 shows;② between...and 替换 from...to;③ 如有多个类别,可先概括再列举(如 "in four European countries — A, B, C, and D")
要点:① 概述段不包含具体数字;② 概括 2-3 个最显著的趋势/特征;③ 如有交叉点,这是必须提及的关键特征;④ 用 Notably / In addition 引出第二个特征
主体段一(起始数据 + 收敛/交叉前):
In [起始年], the number of [较高的类别] stood at approximately [数据], which was the highest figure for either category. This figure then [趋势,如 fell consistently], reaching roughly [数据] by [结束年]. [较低的类别] began lower, at around [数据] in [起始年], and also [趋势] to meet [另一类别] at approximately [数据] in [交叉年].主体段二(交叉后至结束):
Following the intersection, [类别] experienced [趋势描述,如 dramatic volatility]. In [年份], the figure [plummeted / surged] to [its lowest/highest point of approximately 数据], before [rebounding sharply / declining] to around [数据] in [年份]. Meanwhile, [另一类别] continued [their gradual descent/ascent], remaining [below/above] [另一类别] for most of this later period.要点:① 用 stood at approximately / reaching roughly / at around 交替引用数据;② 用 plummeted, rebounding, volatility 等高级词汇描述剧烈变化;③ 用 Meanwhile 在段末补充另一条线的走势作为对比;④ 如有交叉点,可作为分段依据
动态类 × 折线图(多条线 + 历史 + 预测)写作模板
基于 1 篇文章总结,专门用于"4 条及以上线 + 含预测数据"型折线图,重点处理排名变化和历史/预测时态区分
要点:① 沿用 "The line graph illustrates..." 固化开头模板;② 用破折号嵌入国家名称同位语,比 "including" 更精确;③ **必须补充 "with projections provided for X and Y"**——当题目明确指出"含预测"时,改述段必须保留"预测"这一关键信息,否则信息遗漏;④ 注意国家名冠词:the Philippines 必须带 the,Malaysia / Thailand / Indonesia 不带 the
要点:① 两个 Notably 级特征——"整体共同趋势 + 主导对象的领先时间锚点";② 用 "the figure for X" 固定搭配专指某一国家的数据,避免 figures 复数引起的歧义;③ 必须确保主题词与图表一致——如图为"城市化率"则用 urbanisation rate,不可写成 population;④ 不出现具体数字
主体段一(时间序列 + 排名变化):
In [起始年], all [数量] [对象类别] recorded their lowest [主题值], and all are projected to reach their peak by [结束年]. Over the following decades, [某对象的变化], until around [关键时间点] when [对象A] surpassed [对象B] at approximately [数据] and maintained its top ranking thereafter. The figure for [对象C] rose steadily, overtaking [对象D] in around [年份] and [对象E] in around [年份] to become the second-highest. [其他对象]'s figure grew rapidly at first and then reached a plateau between [年份范围], although it is expected to rise rapidly again from [预测起点] to [预测终点].主体段二(起止排名快照):
In [起始年], [起点第一名] was the most [主题形容词] of the [数量] [对象类别], with just over [数据]%, followed by [第二名] ([数据]%), [第三名] ([数据]%), and [第四名] ([数据]%). Although the figures fluctuated noticeably between [前期范围], no further ranking changes are predicted from [后期起点] to [后期终点]. By the end of the period, [终点第一名] is expected to have the largest proportion at over [数据]%, followed by [第二名] at around [数据]%, [第三名] at about [数据]%, and [第四名] at just [数据]%.要点:① **双段结构**——Body 1 走"时间轴 + 排名变化",Body 2 走"起止快照",两段互补而不重复;② 固定衔接序列:In [起始年] → Over the following decades → until around [关键年份] → The figure for X rose steadily, overtaking... → Although... → By the end of the period;③ **时态规则**:历史数据用过去时,预测数据用 "is/are expected to / projected to",不能用 was expected;④ **数据引用阶梯**:起始值用 "just over [N]%",中间值用 "at approximately [N]%",预测值用 "at over [N]%" / "at around [N]%" / "at about [N]%" / "at just [N]%" 呈现梯度;⑤ **国家名冠词**:the Philippines 带 the,其他国家名不带 the
组合类 × 三图组合(饼图 + 表格 + 柱状图)写作模板
基于 1 篇文章总结,专门用于"静态比例(饼图 + 表格)+ 动态趋势(柱状图)"型组合图,重点处理多图段落分配和饼图/表格内部呼应
要点:① 必须**精确点出三种图表名称**(pie chart, table and bar chart),切勿用笼统的 "The diagrams"——这是组合图与单图改述的核心区别;② 用 illustrating 引导出三个并列同位语短语,每个短语对应一种图表,结构对称;③ 时间锚点必须完整——主时间点(如 2016)和动态范围(如 2007-2016)都要点到;④ 切勿使用 various data / different information 等含混表达
要点:① **双层概括原则**——组合图涉及多种数据(动态 + 静态、比例 + 趋势),Overview 必须**同时抓出每种数据的最显著特征**;② 第一句覆盖动态层(柱状图趋势),用 "rose / fell considerably over the X-year period";③ 第二句覆盖静态层(饼图 + 表格),用 In addition 衔接;④ 静态层概括如能跨越饼图和表格两种图表(如"成人在两个维度都占主导"),是 7+ 分水准的高级概括;⑤ 不出现具体数字
主体段一(动态柱状图:起止 + 中间过程):
In [起始年], [主语,如 the total number of loans] started at its lowest point, standing at roughly [起始数据], before climbing to approximately [结束数据] by [结束年]. The figure rose steadily until [早期拐点], after which it fluctuated slightly between [波动范围], before rising again to reach its peak in the final year.主体段二(静态饼图 + 表格:先饼图 → 桥接 → 表格 → 内部规律):
Looking at the pie chart and table for [时间点], around [合计数据]% of [对象] were [主导类别], with those aged [起始年龄] to [结束年龄] forming the largest group at [数据]%, while [次要子类] accounted for a further [数据]%. The remaining members were [剩余对象] ([数据]%) and [剩余对象] aged [年龄范围] ([数据]%). A similar pattern was observed in [表格主题]: [主导类别]-related items made up roughly [数据]% of all [对象], compared with [数据]% for [次要类别] and only [数据]% for [第三类别]. Within both categories, [共同最大子类] was clearly the most popular, with [子类a] and [子类b] each accounting for [数据]%, whereas [最小子类a] and [最小子类b] were the least borrowed, at just [数据]% and [数据]% respectively.要点:① **双段分配策略**——动态数据(柱状图)独立成段,静态数据(饼图 + 表格)合并成段;② **柱状图四点必含**:起点(lowest point at...)、上升(climbing to)、波动(fluctuated slightly between)、终点(peak in the final year);③ **饼图/表格桥接句**——用 "A similar pattern was observed in..." 是组合图专属高分句式,建立两类静态数据的内在呼应;④ **表格内部规律**——用 "Within both categories, X was the most popular" + "whereas Y were the least borrowed" 抓出表格行/列的核心规律;⑤ **年龄固化搭配**——[名词] aged [起始] to [结束];[名词] aged [年龄] and over;⑥ **比例介词固化**——at X%(不能写 in X%);⑦ **respectively** 用于明确多个数据的对应顺序