错误概览

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错误类型
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错误总数
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涉及作文
图表主题事实性误读(最严重 TA 扣分项) 出现 3 次

规则说明:Task 1 的主题必须与图表标题和 Y 轴标签完全一致。本题图表标题为 "Percentage of the population living in cities"——这是**城市化率**(比例),不是**人口总量**。若把主题词写成 population 会导致整篇文章偏离图表,直接触发 TA 失分。建议读图时先读标题和 Y 轴单位,确定主题词后再落笔。

the Malaysia had the largest population for most of the period("largest population" = 最大人口总量,但图表是城市化率)
Malaysia had the highest urbanisation rate for most of the period
Thailand's population grew fast at first(population 同样误读)
Thailand's figure grew rapidly at first(用 the figure 专指该国数据,避免 population 主题词偏差)
all the four countries had the smallest percentages of population in 1970("percentages of population" 语义含混)
all four countries recorded their lowest urbanisation rates in 1970
国家名冠词系统性错误(the Philippines / Malaysia) 出现 7 次

规则说明:英语中国家名冠词使用规则——**以 -s 结尾的群岛/联邦国家**(the Philippines, the Netherlands, the United States, the United Kingdom)**必须带 the**;**单一名称国家**(Malaysia, Thailand, Indonesia, China, Japan)**不带 the**。原文出现规则颠倒——the Philippines 被误写为 Philippines(5 处),而 Malaysia 被误写为 the Malaysia(2 处)。

Philippines was the most urbanized country... / overtaking ... Philippines in 2010 / Philippines at about 55%(Philippines 前缺 the)
the Philippines was... / overtaking ... the Philippines in 2010 / the Philippines at about 55%(群岛国家必须带 the)
the Malaysia had the largest population... / just below the Malaysia(Malaysia 前误加 the)
Malaysia had... / just below Malaysia(单一名称国家不加 the)
预测数据时态错误(will be projected / was expected) 出现 2 次

规则说明:预测数据的时态规则——"预测动作本身"是当下做出的,所以用 **are/is projected to / are/is expected to**,不能用 will be projected(把"被预测"动作放入未来,逻辑错位)也不能用 was expected(表示该预测已过时,但本题预测至今仍有效)。

all the four countries...will be projected to reach their highest number in 2040(will be projected to 逻辑错位)
all four countries...are projected to reach their peak by 2040(are projected to 是预测数据的标准被动结构)
this country was expected to have a rapid increase after 2020 to 2040(was expected 暗示该预测已过时)
it is expected to rise rapidly again from 2020 to 2040(是当下仍有效的预测,用 is expected)
系表动词 + 形容词 + 动词原形连用(are noticeable fluctuate) 出现 1 次

规则说明:一个句子只能有一个主要谓语动词。are(系动词) + noticeable(形容词) + fluctuate(动词原形)三者连用造成双谓语错误。正确结构应为"动词 + 副词"(fluctuated noticeably)或"系动词 + 形容词"(are noticeable),两者只能择一。

Although the figures are noticeable fluctuate during 1970 to 2010
Although the figures fluctuated noticeably between 1970 and 2010(用"动词 + 副词"结构)
either 用于四者(范围错误) 出现 1 次

规则说明:either 只能用于**两者之一**或**两者中每一个**,**不能用于三个及以上对象**。本题有四国,必须用 of the four 或 among the four countries。

Philippines was the most urbanized country for either nations(either 不能用于四国)
the Philippines was the most urbanised country of the four nations(用 of the four 表示"四者中")
数据不准确(nearly 90% vs 实际 ~82%) 出现 1 次

规则说明:Task 1 的数据引用必须严格对照图表刻度。读图时应从 Y 轴最近的网格线向外推,避免过度拔高数值。宁可用保守表达(over 80% / around 82% / approximately 82%)也不要写成 nearly 90% 这类明显高估的描述。

Malaysia is expected to have the largest proportion...nearly 90%(图表显示 2040 Malaysia 约 82%)
Malaysia is expected to have the largest proportion...at over 80%(保守且与图表一致)
衔接词误用(secondly surpassed / Over time) 出现 2 次

规则说明:衔接词必须与其修饰的动作/语境匹配。secondly(序数副词)不能修饰动词 surpassed——它只用于列举顺序("Firstly... Secondly...")。Over time 过于口语化,且在已有具体时间锚点(1992 / 2000 / 2010)的语境下语义重复。

until in 1992 when Malaysia secondly surpassed the Philippines(secondly 序数副词不能修饰动词)
until around 1992 when Malaysia surpassed the Philippines(删除 secondly;加 around 表约数)
Over time, the figures for Indonesia rose steadily(Over time 口语化,且与下文具体时间重复)
The figure for Indonesia rose steadily(直接删除冗余衔接;figure 单数与"Indonesia 单一国家"一致)
Overview 段残句 + 粘连句(流程图高频) 出现 2 次

规则说明:分词短语(Beginning with..., starting from...)不能独立成句,必须并入主句作状语。多个独立分句也不能仅用逗号串联。流程图 Overview 中常见此类错误——写作时必须确保每句都有完整的主谓结构。

Overall there are three main stages in the process. Beginning with the collection of the bottles, then they are cleaned and reshaped, finally, these bottles are recycled and sold in supermarkets.("Beginning with..."分词短语独立成句,且后续逗号串联多个独立句)
Overall, the recycling process involves three main stages: the collection of used bottles from supermarkets, their cleaning and sorting at the cleaning plant, and their reprocessing at the recycling plant before the finished products are returned to consumers, thus completing a full cycle.(用冒号 + 平行的动名词短语列举所有阶段,结构完整)
Overall there are three main stages(Overall 后缺少逗号)
Overall, ...(Overall 作为段首副词,必须用逗号隔开)
工业流程动词搭配错误(undergo + 具体名词) 出现 1 次

规则说明:undergo 后接的应该是抽象过程(undergo a process / treatment / change),而不是具体的设备/容器名(furnace 是具体设备)。工业流程描述中,"在熔炉中熔化"应该用 are melted in a furnace。

they undergo the furnace where they are transformed into liquid glass(undergo 不能直接接 furnace 这类具体设备)
they are melted in a furnace and transformed into liquid glass(用 are melted in a furnace 准确描述加工动作 + 加工地点)
介词错误(poured in → poured into) 出现 1 次

规则说明:当动作表示"进入容器内部"时,必须用 into,不能用 in。in 表示"在...内部(静态位置)",into 表示"进入...内部(动态方向)"。pour、put、insert、move 等表示动作的动词后必须用 into。

both recycled and new liquid glass are poured in moulds("倒入模具"是动态方向,必须用 into)
poured into moulds to be shaped into new bottles(into 表示进入容器内部)
衔接词冗余 / 平行结构错误 出现 2 次

规则说明:① Subsequently 与 After 都表"之后",连用造成语义冗余。② 用 and 连接的两个并列项必须保持词性/结构一致(noun + noun 或 verb-ing + verb-ing),不能混用。

Subsequently, after the bottles of three colors are processed(Subsequently 与 after 语义重叠)
In the final stage, the sorted bottles are sent to the recycling plant(用 In the final stage 替换冗余的双层时间状语)
the process of making glass bottles and recycling(making + bottles 是"动词 + 宾语"结构,recycling 单独作并列项时含义不清——回收什么?且与前者结构不平行)
the recycling process / the process of recycling glass bottles(统一为"recycling + 宾语"结构,含义清晰)
事实错误(类别数量 / 领先范围) 出现 2 次

规则说明:Task 1 要求准确描述图表。写作前必须数清楚类别/对象/时间点的数量,并对"最高/最低/唯一/全部"等绝对化表述做交叉验证——这是 TA 维度的基础得分项。

seven types of categories(表格实际只有 3 个类别)
three categories of items(必须与图表实际数量一致)
Turkey citizens spent considerably more on all three categories(实际 Turkey 只在 2 个类别领先,Italy 在 Clothing/Footwear 最高)
Turkey led in two of the three categories(精确表达部分领先,避免绝对化)
粘连句 / 残句 出现 2 次

规则说明:两个独立句不能只用逗号连接(粘连句 comma splice),必须用句号、分号或连词。"Regarding X, which was..." 这类结构中 which 引导从句,必须有主句才构成完整句,否则是残句。

Regarding leisure and education, which was the least popular types with the minimal percentage of spending in all five countries.(残句——only 从句,无主句)
As for leisure and education, this was the least popular category in all five countries.(改为独立主句)
Turkey still led with 4.35%, conversely, Spain had the smallest at just 1.98%.(粘连句——conversely 是副词不能连接两个独立句)
Turkey still led with 4.35%, whereas Spain had the smallest proportion at just 1.98%.(用 whereas 从句连接)
不准确的词汇/搭配(表格题专属) 出现 4 次

规则说明:表格题的数据是 percentage,不是 counts;单个类别用 category 不用 types;"minimal" 在此语境应为 smallest;"similar" 的使用门槛是差距可忽略。

Turkey recorded the highest counts among the five nations(counts 指计数,不匹配百分比数据)
Turkey recorded the highest percentage among the five nations
the least popular types with the minimal percentage(单数类别应为 category;minimal 在此不自然)
the least popular category with the smallest percentage
held the largest portion among all categories(portion 在占比描述中不如 proportion 正式)
accounted for the largest proportion among all categories
Italy and Spain had similar spending at 16.36% and 18.80%(2.4 个百分点的差距称 similar 不准确)
Italy and Spain fell in between at 16.36% and 18.80% respectively(用 fell in between 更客观)
代词/冠词基础错误 出现 3 次

规则说明:every 后接单数名词;代词 it/its/their 的指代必须与前文主语的数一致;"with a total 数字" 搭配不通顺。

in every countries
in every country(every 后接单数)
16.36% and 18.80% of its total expenditure(its 指代前文五个国家应为复数)
16.36% and 18.80% of their total expenditure(或直接删除该短语,用 respectively 替代)
Turkey citizens spent considerably more(国家名不能直接作定语修饰复数名词)
Turkish citizens spent considerably more(或直接用 Turkey 作主语)
被动语态错误 出现 3 次

规则说明:被动语态 = be 动词 + 过去分词(-ed/不规则形式)。流程图中的环境动作(被产下、被藏在...之下、被迁移)必须使用完整被动结构。不能用动词原形代替过去分词。

are hide under the small stones
are hidden under the small stones(hide 的过去分词是 hidden)
cover by reeds
are covered by reeds(缺少 be 动词)
They are then move to lower river
They then migrate to the lower river(原句主动 move 与 are 冲突,且语义上应为主动迁移)
冠词与单复数不一致 出现 2 次

规则说明:a/an 只修饰单数可数名词,不能修饰复数名词。"a eggs" / "a fully mature adults" 属于基础语法错误。

Beginning with a eggs
Beginning with eggs(复数名词不用 a)
ending to a fully mature adults
ending with fully mature adults(end 搭配 with;复数不用 a)
动词搭配错误 出现 2 次

规则说明:英语动词有固定的介词搭配:become 直接跟名词(不加 to);end 搭配 with,不搭配 to。

the eggs become to fries
the eggs hatch into fry(become 不跟 to;且 fry 单复数同形,不能写 fries)
ending to a fully mature adults
ending with fully mature adults(end with 固定搭配)
双重比较级 出现 1 次

规则说明:比较级只能使用一种形式——either more + 原级 or 原级 + -er,不能两者同时使用。

the water current become more faster than upper river
the water current is faster than that of the upper river(faster 已是比较级,不能再加 more;且比较对象应一致——current vs. current)
句子残缺(缺系动词/主句) 出现 2 次

规则说明:英语每个完整句必须包含主语 + 谓语。定语从句 "which..." 必须有动词;分词短语不能独立成句。

fries, which three to eight centimeters in length
fry, which are three to eight centimetres in length(从句缺系动词 are)
Beginning with a eggs and ending to a fully mature adults.(独立成句)
It begins with eggs and ends with fully mature adults.(分词短语不能独立成句,应并入前句或改为完整句)
Overview 内容单薄 出现 1 次

规则说明:Task 1 流程图(生命周期)的 Overview 必须同时覆盖三大维度:① 阶段数量与名称 ② 环境切换 ③ 循环性。只概括"几个阶段"是不够的,会被判定为部分回应。

Overall, there are three main stages in the development of a salmon. Beginning with eggs and ending with adults.(只覆盖阶段数量)
Overall, it is clear that salmon pass through three main developmental stages — fry, smolt and adult — and inhabit three distinct environments before returning to their birthplace to spawn, thus completing a full cycle.(同时覆盖三阶段 + 三环境 + 循环)
数据不准确 出现 3 次

规则说明:Task 1 要求准确引用图表中的数据。数值、时间范围、交叉点等必须与图表一致。读图时应仔细对照坐标轴刻度。

"from 2011 to 2020" — 时间范围错误
"between 2011 and 2018" — 图表显示 2011-2018
"a total of 63000" — 数值严重偏差
"at around 6,300" — 图表显示约 6,300
"intersected at approximately 6000" — 交叉点数值偏差
"intersected at approximately 4,400" — 图表显示约 4,400
拼写错误 出现 4 次

规则说明:拼写错误会直接影响 Lexical Resource 评分。常见的易错词需要在考前反复练习。

overtooked
overtook(overtake 的过去式)
remianing
remaining
approximatelty
approximately
remainding
remaining
Finaly
Finally(双 l)
介词搭配错误 出现 2 次

规则说明:between 必须搭配 and(不能搭配 to);until 后直接接时间(不需要 in)。

between 2011 to 2018
between 2011 and 2018(或 from 2011 to 2018)
until in 2014
until 2014
主谓一致 / 冠词与数一致 出现 2 次

规则说明:名词的单复数必须与动词和冠词保持一致。a + 单数名词,复数名词不用 a。

closed shop are more than opened shops
shop closures were more than shop openings(复数 + 过去时)
a significant fluctuations
significant fluctuations(复数名词不用 a)
代词指代不清 出现 1 次

规则说明:代词 it/they 的指代对象必须清晰明确。当句中有多个名词时,建议直接使用名词而非代词,避免歧义。

closed shops started with a total of 63000 and in 2012, it overtooked closed shops
前文主语是 closed shops,用 "it overtooked closed shops" 变成了"关闭商店超过了关闭商店"——指代混乱
数据计算错误(TA 高压线 🔴) 出现 2 次

规则说明:Task 1 的 TA 评分明确要求 "accurately reports / accurately presents data"——数据计算错误会**直接限制 TA 不超过 6 分**。建议建立"读数据 → 心算合计 → 与文中数字交叉验证"的固定流程:饼图各扇区合计应为 100%;表格分组合计也应为 100%,每写出一个汇总数字就对照原始数据复核。

nearly 70% of library members were adults(饼图中 Adults 18-64 = 51%,Adults 65+ = 12%,合计 = 63%)
around 63% of library members were adults
books and audio books the adults borrowed accounting for 55%(表格中 Adult fiction 38% + Adult non-fiction 13% + Adult audio books 2% = 53%)
adult-related items made up roughly 53% of all loans
中式英语搭配(in all walks of people / holds X% percentage / occupy / count) 出现 5 次

规则说明:中式英语是 LR 维度严重失分项。常见雷区:① in all walks of life 是固定短语("各行各业"),不能改造为 "in all walks of people";② percentage 与 % 已是同义重复,holds X% percentage 错上加错;③ occupy 意为"占据空间",不能描述比例;④ count 通常指人头数,不能形容比例。

who shared 51% in all walks of people
forming the largest group at 51%(用 form / forming + at + 数据)
children's who holds 45% percentage(children's 是所有格不能被 who 修饰;45% 已是 percentage)
45% for children's items
books and audio books the adults borrowed also occupy the largest proportion
adult-related items made up roughly 53% of all loans(用 made up / accounted for 描述比例)
DVDs and adult audio books has the smallest count in 1% and 2%
were the least borrowed, at just 1% and 2% respectively(用 the least borrowed 描述比例最低)
年龄介词错误(in → aged) 出现 3 次

规则说明:描述年龄区间的标准固化搭配是 "[名词] aged [起始年龄] to [结束年龄]" 或 "[名词] aged [年龄] and over / and under"——介词必须是 aged,不是 in / in age。这是雅思社会类 Task 1(人口、消费、教育图表)的高频固定搭配。

adults in 18 to 64
adults aged 18 to 64
young adults in age 13 to 17
young adults aged 13 to 17
Adults in 65 and over
adults aged 65 and over(adults 不大写)
比例介词错误(in X% → at X%) 出现 3 次

规则说明:引用比例数据时介词必须是 at,不能是 in。固化模板:accounting for at X% / forming the largest group at X% / the least borrowed at just X%——全部用 at。

fiction account for the biggest proportions comes from both children and adult in 38%
with children's fiction and adult fiction each accounting for 38%(at + 数据,但本句改为 each accounting for 后省略 at)
DVDs and adult audio books has the smallest count in 1% and 2%
were the least borrowed, at just 1% and 2% respectively
during 2009 to 2014(年份范围介词错误——during 后只接单一时段)
between 2009 and 2014(年份范围用 between...and...)
主谓一致 / 时态错乱(柱状图段集中爆发) 出现 5 次

规则说明:① 描述图表已发生数据(2007-2016 / 2016 年都是过去时间),全篇必须用过去时;② 主语后不能直接接 -ing 形式(必须有助动词);③ 不可数名词(fiction)配单数动词,复数主语(DVDs / audio books)配复数动词。

the total number of loans starts with the smallest figures(应过去时)
the total number of loans started at its lowest point
and then it increasing and reached(it 后直接接 -ing 严重语法错误,且与 reached 时态冲突)
before climbing to approximately 22,000(用介词 + 动名词紧凑串联)
fiction account for the biggest proportions(fiction 不可数应用 accounts,且应过去时 accounted)
fiction was clearly the most popular(整句重组,避开主谓陷阱)
children's DVDs and adult audio books has the smallest count(复数主语应配 were,且应过去时)
children's DVDs and adult audio books were the least borrowed
adults account for the majority...(描述 2016 既成事实应过去时)
adults accounted for the majority of both library members and books borrowed in 2016
严重错乱句法(with a slightly fluctuate / children's who holds) 出现 2 次

规则说明:① 副词 slightly 修饰动词(如 fluctuated slightly),不能修饰 a + 名词;② 所有格(children's)不能被 who 引导的定语从句修饰,因为 who 只能修饰人名词。这两类错误是英语句法的基础线,必须避免。

with a slightly fluctuate during 2009 to 2014(with a + 副词 + 动词原形 完全错乱)
it fluctuated slightly between 2009 and 2014(slightly 副词修饰动词 fluctuated)
compared to children's who holds 45% percentage(children's 是所有格,不能被 who 引导从句修饰)
compared with 45% for children's items(用 for + 名词替代错乱定语从句)
拼写 + 标点(lookng / he / 漏句号) 出现 4 次

规则说明:低级失误(拼写、漏句号、大小写)虽不致命,但会**集中拉低 GRA 维度的"准确性"分数**。建议成文后用 30 秒做"句号 + 拼写 + 大小写"三遍快扫——这是性价比最高的提分动作。

lookng at he pie chart(looking 漏 i;he 应为 the)
Looking at the pie chart
total loans by category in 2016(开头段末漏句号)
...recorded between 2007 and 2016. (添加句号)
smallest count in 1% and 2%(Body 2 末漏句号)
...at just 1% and 2% respectively. (添加句号)
Adults in 65 and over(adults 误大写)
adults aged 65 and over
堆叠柱状图读图偏差(个别数据不准) 出现 2 次

规则说明:本图为堆叠柱状图(stacked bar chart)——每根柱子的总高度 = 该群体参与该活动的总参与率(如男生玩游戏柱子 = 85%);柱子内部 3 段堆叠 = 在已参与者中按时长(<1h / 1-3h / 4h+)的分布。用户的核心数据(68% 游戏总参与、62% 聊天总参与、52% 女生游戏总参与、55% 男生聊天、68% 女生聊天)读图全部正确,但有两处偏差:① 男生玩游戏的柱子总高度约 85%,原文写 95%;② 男生玩游戏的时长内部分布原文写 4h+ 32% / 1-3h 30% / <1h 7%,实际为 11% / 44% / 30%(不仅数据错,三段相对大小关系也颠倒了)。建议读数时多看几遍 Y 轴刻度,并对每根柱子做"总高度 + 内部分段"双重校验。

About 95 percent of boys recorded in the chat play on game consoles(柱子总高度约 85%,并非 95%)
As many as 85% of boys played on games consoles
the percentages of boys who spend more than 4 hours, 1 to 3 hours and less than 1 hour on these games are 32%, 30%, and 7%, respectively(不仅数据错,三段相对大小关系也颠倒)
Among boys, 44% played for one to three hours and a further 11% for more than four hours...(实际 1-3h 占比 44% 最高,<1h 第二 30%,4h+ 最低 11%)
事实判断错误:把 13pp 差距误判为"fairly similar" 出现 1 次

规则说明:用户在 Overview 中判断"chatting 男女比例 fairly similar"——但实际 girls 68% vs boys 55%,差距 13pp,明显有性别差异(girls 更高)。Overview 的判断必须基于真实数据交叉验证,不能凭印象。Task 1 中"两组数据是否相似"通常以 5pp 为粗略阈值:<5pp 可说 broadly comparable / fairly similar,5-10pp 应说 noticeably / slightly higher,>10pp 必须说 considerably higher / a clear gap。

the proportions of both gender in chatting online are fairly familiar(事实错误:差距 13pp 不算 similar;且 familiar 应为 similar)
girls are more likely than boys to chat online(girls 68% vs boys 55%,应认定为有差异)
youngest 误作名词指"年轻人" 出现 3 次

规则说明:youngest 是形容词最高级,不能作名词指代"年轻人"。常见替代:teenagers / young people / adolescents / the young。原文反复使用 "youngest" 作主语 / 宾语,是中式英语典型痕迹,会同时拉低 LR 和 GRA 两个维度。

more youngest tend to play video games / 68 percent of youngest / proportions of both gender(youngest 误作名词)
teenagers aged 10 to 15(用题目原本就有的 teenagers 是最稳的选择)
time 不可数误作可数(how many time / playing times) 出现 2 次

规则说明:time 表"时间"时**不可数**,应搭配 how much time / the amount of time / a long time;time 仅在表"次数"时可数(如 three times)。这是典型的中文母语干扰。

how many time the teenagers spend chatting online(time 不可数)
the amount of time that teenagers spend chatting online(用 the amount of time + that 从句更书面)
the duration gap of playing times(playing times 当复数名词使用,且 duration gap 表达冗余)
the patterns for chatting online are fairly similar / In terms of chatting online(删除 duration gap 这类冗余结构)
familiar 与 similar 混淆 / 题目术语偏离 出现 3 次

规则说明:familiar = 熟悉的(指人对事物熟悉),similar = 相似的(指事物之间相似)——两词词形相近但语义完全不同,是中式英语高频陷阱。另外,题目用词必须**精准复用**:题目说 games consoles 就不能写成 video games / computer games(虽然意思接近,但术语不一致会导致 LR 扣分)。

the proportions of both gender in chatting online are fairly familiar(familiar 应为 similar;both gender 应为 both genders)
the patterns for chatting online are fairly similar between the two genders
video games / computer games / play on game consoles(与题目 games consoles 不一致;game consoles 应为 games consoles)
games consoles(直接复用题目术语,最稳)
catagory(拼写)
category
关系从句谓语错误 / Whereas 句首独立使用 出现 3 次

规则说明:① 关系从句中 who 后必须接**谓语动词**(who play)而非 -ing 形式(who playing);② Whereas 是**从属连词**,不能像 However 那样在句首独立使用,应改用 By contrast / In contrast 引出对比段落,或者把 whereas 嵌入复合句中部。

young people who playing computer games / boys who play video games are nearly double those of girls(who playing 缺谓语;逻辑主语错位)
boys devote considerably more time to games consoles than girls(直接重写为主谓清晰的对比句)
Whereas, the gender gap narrowed in chatting online, with 55% of boys and 68% of girls.(Whereas 句首独立使用;55%/68% 数据本身正确,但已在前文覆盖,本段重复)
By contrast, gaming habits show a striking gender divide.(用 By contrast 引出段落对比;55%/68% 这两个正确数据已在 Body 1 用 "with girls noticeably more involved than boys at 68% and 55% respectively" 完整覆盖,本段无需重复)